You need to make the character designs more varied, they’re all the same body type and height and its incredibly dull and lazy. Also I saw the message to buy t-shirts. Can’t tell if you’re being ironic or desperate. In terms of animation, it was sub-par, consisting of only skewing and tweens.
However, I believe that you can improve on everything if you take on criticism from other people. It will help in more ways than you can imagine.
It was pretty damn good, except for the comic sans sequences, which were a bit lazy in my opinion, but the animation was really good, which sort of negates that bit. It makes me glad that I support you, you are stuffed with potential! More of this!
It's good I guess, it invokes nostalgia because I grew up with sprite animations as did many people, but after a while I started to think that some went on for too long but weren't funny.
As a whole it was still good, but I think it was too long for something like this.
THIS ISN'T LOUDEST I WANT TO SEE LINCOLNS LITTLE BOY TITS
more of this, loved the use of 3d models
The narrative was good, drawing could be better but the animation was good. backgrounds are okay (they're not bad)
Overall, nice job!
I really liked the storyline, the humour reminds me of "It's always Sunny", the character designs are good, and I like the change of mood in the story. My only complaint is that there could have been a bit more animation, but regardless, it was still good
I actually never seen "It's Always Sunny" XD
The character designs aren't very good, and the animation is incredibly limited. If this is a teaser for a series, I can't see what the teaser is trying to say about it.
Thank you for your comment. I was just showing my drawings actually. This is not a teaser as such, its just to show the drawings i have come up with. Can you say more about the character designs. Thank you.
Great satire, animation was smooth, but the linework could be a lot better. Still a great animation though!
Yeah, my linework usually isn't this bad. It had been a while since I had drawn before making this, and even then, a lot of this was rushed. Will definitely be taking it slower for the next cartoon though, so hopefully that won't be a problem.
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